give me your criticism

[mmacount123]

ok so I have here a couple of links in which I fight the same opponent in different local tournaments. the first link is a win on points, 25-0. I was extremely active and was rather hyper as it was my first ever BJJ tournament match.

the second link, it was my 2nd tournament in which I told myself that I would remain calm and tried to think instead of just blasting away with transitions.
please rate me and tell me which is the better win.


here I go full blast the entire match.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iAj56Mlb_o
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here, I was in worse shape, and I relaxed a bit more. please notice how I try to set up for a calf lock, but it fails, advice on that would be great as well.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7-AocXHp16k
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let the thrashing begin, don't go easy.

don't know why the embedded isn't working, will go back to stickies asap.

yea, i need help with the embedded, but please follow the links!

[mmacount123]

anyone else live in the dallas/fort worth area?

[black mariah]

I am. Where do you train at?

[G8]

I don't have any real criticism, but I do have a couple of questions. 25-0? that first one ends in a tap to an RNC. also, what organization lets white belts do footlocks in tournaments?

[black mariah]

also, what organization lets white belts do footlocks in tournaments?

One I want to join. I'm sick of "You can't do that, you're a moron." tournaments. Which is one reason doing judo is going to ensandinate my vag very quickly.

My METAPHORICAL vag, of course.

[mmacount123]

I don't have any real criticism, but I do have a couple of questions. 25-0? that first one ends in a tap to an RNC. also, what organization lets white belts do footlocks in tournaments?

sorry, here is the link to the 25-0 match http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7-AocXHp16k

the threadstarter has also been modified.

[Das Moose]

Now both of your links are to the same match. Neither of which is a win on points. Also if you could point out who you are in each match, that'd be just super.

And also - I posted way more clearly labeled vids, why'd I not get any attention? :P I probably suck more too.

[mmacount123]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4iAj56Mlb_o

fixed. also fixed at threadstart. this is the win on points!

Also if you could point out who you are in each match, that'd be just super.

im the guy with the buzz cut. white gi. winner of both matches

[MEGALEF]

I would recommend never ever giving up mount for kesa gatame like you do in the second fight.
Apart from that I'd say you seem so be doing a lot better than the 4 month white belts we have at my school. Have you competed in other sports before?

[mmacount123]

tae kwon do. one tournament at red belt

[GoldenJonas]

Good job man. The first match was complete domination, good positional control; the second suffered from the "conjoined twins submission leg lock" syndrome. However, you came out on top so that's all that matters.

Out of the two, I liked the first one more.

[Das Moose]

Okay, now criticise meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showthread.php?t=46715

[mmacount123]

that "judo shit" racks up points and sets up a pretty cool submission, ( I can't seem to get it yet )

besides, it feels a little safer than sidemount for me at the moment when jumping back and forth to rack up points.

[mmacount123]

this is what I wanted, good, non sugar-coated criticism, where are the rest of you bullshido bjjers?

[babo78]

You need to work on your positioning. Jumping from mount to that judo shit is a pretty poor move.

Even in Judo, that is still pretty shitty move. He shouldn't have switched.