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    #2
    meh. Good first attempt.

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      #3
      Learning to use Paintshop Pro took a while, I'm still learning.
      I need better jokes, but I'm limitted because of artistic talent.

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        #4
        Your jokes need to be wittier.

        And also, I don't know what happened.

        The art is fine, though.

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          #5
          Um... LOL?

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            #6
            I mean, look at this:
            http://www.toothpastefordinner.com/0...n-paradise.gif

            Not exactly artistic. In fact, it is meant to be so crappy that it's funny.

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              #7
              Originally posted by Thaiboxerken
              Learning to use Paintshop Pro took a while, I'm still learning.
              I need better jokes, but I'm limitted because of artistic talent.

              that joke would of been better if you set it up more. Like implying the master is badass, there the student think he badass but all he done is forms.

              Kickcatcher good at this, maybe bounce ideas off him.

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                #8
                Just keep at it. If you look at most web comics, the first ones are always shit and they start to get better with more "issues".

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                  #9
                  Originally posted by War Phalange
                  I mean, look at this:
                  http://www.toothpastefordinner.com/0...n-paradise.gif

                  Not exactly artistic. In fact, it is meant to be so crappy that it's funny.
                  married to the sea is far superior

                  http://www.marriedtothesea.com/062906/war-rules.gif

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                    #10
                    Originally posted by War Phalange
                    Just keep at it. If you look at most web comics, the first ones are always shit and they start to get better with more "issues".
                    Apart from megatokyo which progressively got shittier and shittier and is now approaching critical mass.

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                      #11
                      http://www.marriedtothesea.com/053006/a-yam.gif

                      http://www.toothpastefordinner.com/053006/yam.gif

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                        #12
                        Originally posted by fanatical
                        Apart from megatokyo which progressively got shittier and shittier and is now approaching critical mass.

                        die. I will drop by to rape you with 1337-sp34k later.

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                          #13
                          Originally posted by pl4zM4
                          die. I will drop by to rape you with 1337-sp34k later.
                          I liked megatokyo at some point, but what's up with it?

                          I mean, I used to be "The emo kickboxer", but still megatokyo is SO emo it almost made me sick.

                          I don't think there is a sigle comic/mang/webcomic/whatever which contains the wird "care" more than Megatokyo.

                          blah, blah, blah... <...you care for me?>... balh, blah <...I know you care...>... blah, blah... <...feelings...>...blah, blah, blah...

                          Oh, come on!

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                            #14
                            Angst entertains me. I am weird like that.

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                              #15
                              I was expecting a more angsty reply on your side.

                              I must confess I still read megatokyo, but the history goes at turtle pace.

                              Besides, all characters are quite deluded.

                              Largo is the only one I really like, specially when he acts "serious". He has the best line in the whole manga/doujin... doujinksi... whatever: "your game, your rules, but that doesn't mean I've got to play it" (and waaaaaaaaay later talking to the same girl) "I only play the games I find interesting". Hah, and he didn't noticed what he just said!

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