Our first commercial

**ruptureclothing** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 6:53pm

Thanks guys. Keep the feedback coming. We really want to make these great, as they will be released as part of a continuous series.

Cheers,

Nick

**1point2** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 6:54pm

I liked the black and white old-timey feel. It seemed like an old boxing reel-to-reel.

**EmperorCesar** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 8:17pm

Originally Posted by ruptureclothing

Hey guys,

Reg. Shorts: I talked to Neal about doing a different version. Stay tuned - we should have something out about that shortly.

Thanks,

Nick

I was looking for the Bullshido shorts the other day. I did not get a chance to get a pair when they were first released, but if you release a new design I would definitely pick them up.

**marcusdbrutus** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 8:24pm

Originally Posted by Hesperus

YouTube - Nike Football Leave Nothing

That soundtrack is now my workout music.

Also, I am going to go watch the **** out of The Last of the Mohicans, right now.

**Tom Kagan** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 8:26pm

It should be 30 seconds, not a minute.

**3moose1** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 8:29pm

It doesn't advertise your clothing enough.

**vashanka** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 8:38pm

I like the direction the company is going in. Grassroots is better than superstars; I buy your products, but I know I'll never fight pro, even in the small promotions. That advert talks to me.

**ruptureclothing** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 9:00pm

Originally Posted by 3moose1

It doesn't advertise your clothing enough.

Hey moose,

Watch it again, careful this time :).

**Whacker** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 9:16pm

Nick, couple of things. Of course these are just my opinions.

First, that's a great first start.

Second, thirdsies on what Omega said. Love that line. That's what's going to make me remember the commercial.

Third, you probably could whittle it down more to 30 seconds and still be just as effective.

Fourth, I gotta agree with Moosey. You should focus more on your products. People wearing them, esp. people beating the **** out of other people while wearing them.

Fifth, the last 10 seconds was kinda bleh. Could have finished it off strong with either a. some heavy hits or slams or b. the "you can't beat me" line, which is awesome.

**ruptureclothing** · Posted On: 9/24/2009 9:22pm

Originally Posted by Whacker

Nick, couple of things. Of course these are just my opinions.

First, that's a great first start.

Second, thirdsies on what Omega said. Love that line. That's what's going to make me remember the commercial.

Third, you probably could whittle it down more to 30 seconds and still be just as effective.

Fourth, I gotta agree with Moosey. You should focus more on your products. People wearing them, esp. people beating the **** out of other people while wearing them.

Fifth, the last 10 seconds was kinda bleh. Could have finished it off strong with either a. some heavy hits or slams or b. the "you can't beat me" line, which is awesome.

Hey man (and everyone),

Thanks for the feedback. Keep it going. The 30 second thing is universal... I'm actually going to have to call this a "short film" of sorts. For the record, the film-maker said the same thing, it was just me being stubborn :).

The next commercial will hold the 30-second mark:). I'm not sure whether we'll be able to come up with something as cool as "You might win, but you're not gonna beat me", but it will have chicks fighting, so that's a good start :).