Thread: Our first commercial
9/24/2009 6:53pm, #11
Thanks guys. Keep the feedback coming. We really want to make these great, as they will be released as part of a continuous series.
9/24/2009 6:54pm, #12
I liked the black and white old-timey feel. It seemed like an old boxing reel-to-reel.What a disgrace it is for a man to grow old without ever seeing the beauty and strength of which his body is capable. -Xenophon's Socrates
9/24/2009 8:17pm, #13
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9/24/2009 8:26pm, #15
It should be 30 seconds, not a minute.Calm down, it's only ones and zeros.
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9/24/2009 8:29pm, #16
It doesn't advertise your clothing enough.
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9/24/2009 8:38pm, #17
- Join Date
- Dec 2008
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I like the direction the company is going in. Grassroots is better than superstars; I buy your products, but I know I'll never fight pro, even in the small promotions. That advert talks to me.
9/24/2009 9:00pm, #18
9/24/2009 9:16pm, #19
Nick, couple of things. Of course these are just my opinions.
First, that's a great first start.
Second, thirdsies on what Omega said. Love that line. That's what's going to make me remember the commercial.
Third, you probably could whittle it down more to 30 seconds and still be just as effective.
Fourth, I gotta agree with Moosey. You should focus more on your products. People wearing them, esp. people beating the **** out of other people while wearing them.
Fifth, the last 10 seconds was kinda bleh. Could have finished it off strong with either a. some heavy hits or slams or b. the "you can't beat me" line, which is awesome.
9/24/2009 9:22pm, #20
Hey man (and everyone),
Thanks for the feedback. Keep it going. The 30 second thing is universal... I'm actually going to have to call this a "short film" of sorts. For the record, the film-maker said the same thing, it was just me being stubborn :).
The next commercial will hold the 30-second mark:). I'm not sure whether we'll be able to come up with something as cool as "You might win, but you're not gonna beat me", but it will have chicks fighting, so that's a good start :).