Article: VoiDH: Teh Forum Edition #3
VoiDH: Teh Forum Edition #3
Total Comments 16
2/25/2008 3:01pm, #2
2/25/2008 3:04pm, #3
I made a cartoon in the 4th grade once. A guy raped a hooker, and the police arrested him for shoplifting. I thought it was funny...
2/25/2008 3:06pm, #4Originally Posted by WorldWarCheese
2/25/2008 3:13pm, #5
Yeah... talking penises would be wicked pisseh.
2/25/2008 3:14pm, #6
2/25/2008 5:24pm, #7
It took me a minute or so to get it... I'm tired.
2/25/2008 9:29pm, #8
I exhaled and my shoulders bounced, you win. But it still feels like you aren't listening...
Make it more animated.
Inorporate timing, don't beat dead horses, and take advantage of the fact that you have a comic.
Timing and surprise.
Surprise, less predictability.
Use a more appropriate format.
So far, this one and the super bowl/UFC 81 were the best. I'd like to see these get better, and I'm looking forward to these being funny. Maybe even bookmark worthy. Do you read a lot of webcomics? Right now, it feels like you're ditching any sort of format and doing whatever you feel like (frame-wise). Read some webcomics, pay attention to the format.
I want to see these become funny.
2/25/2008 9:59pm, #9
2/25/2008 10:10pm, #10
I have to say... some of those ^^ cartoons were quality stuff.