In AK's defense, I've seen worse web comics.
It raised a smile, which is more than can be said for the majority of t'internet comics.
Better, good idea for a subject, but poor execution and still not funny.
They both look like dicks.
Not personality-wise, but like actual penises.
It feels like you blew your load too early. I would suggest some amatuerish research into the 4 panel comic punchline delivery theory.
I don't quite remember how it goes, but I think it went:
Try and imagine each frame within that context. The first frame sets up everything, which you did well in this one, but you shouldn't have included the "UFC 81 / Superbowl!" in the very first frame. That belongs somewhere in the third; the second could've been a prolongation of the first. Then the fourth could have had them hating each other, in a more comical manner than what was represented here.
It seems like what you need is practice. You have some decent jokes made, but you're too eager for teh funnies. Then again, what the hell do I know, I took Kuk Sool Won.
I feel AK should stick to what he's good at... dojo crashing shitty schools and posting THAT up here.
I don't care, more things on this site means that I can spend more time during work with that familiar black background.
Take MrBadGuy 's advice...other than that...it was pretty good.
I think it was indeed the people's eyebrow.
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