Posted On:2/04/2008 12:54am
In AK's defense, I've seen worse web comics.
Posted On:2/04/2008 11:12am
Style: Bits and pieces
It raised a smile, which is more than can be said for the majority of t'internet comics.
Posted On:2/04/2008 1:26pm
Style: BJJ,MT,RBSD (on hiatus)
Better, good idea for a subject, but poor execution and still not funny.
Posted On:2/04/2008 1:52pm
Style: chinese boxing
They both look like dicks.
Not personality-wise, but like actual penises.
King of the Impossible
Posted On:2/05/2008 12:20pm
It feels like you blew your load too early. I would suggest some amatuerish research into the 4 panel comic punchline delivery theory.
I don't quite remember how it goes, but I think it went:
Try and imagine each frame within that context. The first frame sets up everything, which you did well in this one, but you shouldn't have included the "UFC 81 / Superbowl!" in the very first frame. That belongs somewhere in the third; the second could've been a prolongation of the first. Then the fourth could have had them hating each other, in a more comical manner than what was represented here.
It seems like what you need is practice. You have some decent jokes made, but you're too eager for teh funnies. Then again, what the hell do I know, I took Kuk Sool Won.
^ the answer to life
Posted On:2/05/2008 12:39pm
Style: bjj/(not enough)MT
I feel AK should stick to what he's good at... dojo crashing shitty schools and posting THAT up here.
Posted On:2/07/2008 9:34am
Style: No-Gi BJJ
I don't care, more things on this site means that I can spend more time during work with that familiar black background.
Posted On:2/07/2008 9:41am
Take MrBadGuy 's advice...other than that...it was pretty good.
Posted On:2/08/2008 7:37am
Style: Tae Kwon-Do, Fencing
I think it was indeed the people's eyebrow.
Posted On:2/14/2008 11:36pm
I laughed, **** you all
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