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  1. Mas is offline
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    2/04/2008 12:54am


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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    In AK's defense, I've seen worse web comics.

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     Style: Bits and pieces

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    It raised a smile, which is more than can be said for the majority of t'internet comics.
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    2/04/2008 1:26pm


     Style: BJJ,MT,RBSD (on hiatus)

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    Better, good idea for a subject, but poor execution and still not funny.
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    2/04/2008 1:52pm


     Style: chinese boxing

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    They both look like dicks.

    Not personality-wise, but like actual penises.
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     Style: Grapplomancer

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    It feels like you blew your load too early. I would suggest some amatuerish research into the 4 panel comic punchline delivery theory.

    I don't quite remember how it goes, but I think it went:

    Set up

    Continuation

    Twist

    Punchline

    Try and imagine each frame within that context. The first frame sets up everything, which you did well in this one, but you shouldn't have included the "UFC 81 / Superbowl!" in the very first frame. That belongs somewhere in the third; the second could've been a prolongation of the first. Then the fourth could have had them hating each other, in a more comical manner than what was represented here.

    It seems like what you need is practice. You have some decent jokes made, but you're too eager for teh funnies. Then again, what the hell do I know, I took Kuk Sool Won.
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    2/05/2008 12:39pm


     Style: bjj/(not enough)MT

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    I feel AK should stick to what he's good at... dojo crashing shitty schools and posting THAT up here.
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    2/07/2008 9:34am


     Style: No-Gi BJJ

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    I don't care, more things on this site means that I can spend more time during work with that familiar black background.
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     Style: JackOAllTradesMasterONone

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    Take MrBadGuy 's advice...other than that...it was pretty good.
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    2/08/2008 7:37am


     Style: Tae Kwon-Do, Fencing

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    I think it was indeed the people's eyebrow.
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    2/14/2008 11:36pm

    Bullshido Newbie
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    I laughed, **** you all
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