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As a lover of all things webcomicy, I see potential here. I chuckled at #3 and I smiled at #5, 4 could've been better and 1 & 2 aren't really worth mentioning (sorry). Still, pay no attention to anyone saying your artwork needs to be better (see pixelcomic.net), but I agree that more thought needs to be developed in the punchlines. The punchlines themselves can be fine (even in the first one, with Phrost's last comment), but the actual words need to be worked on. I would also agree that a bit more motion can be used just with simple implication of movement. Turn their heads, have them face one way or another, mopve their distances around a bit. In this last one, I would suggest having the straight guy (no, not orientation, you freaks - classic vaudeville, there's a jokester and the straight man - the one who always gets floored by the punchline; in this case it's the black guy) give some reaction to the punchline, either incredulous or angered by his friend - whatever his personality is, that's your call. Anyway, keep going and screw the naysayers. Just remember that no artist who's famous was well-liked during his lifetime (except Leonardo...and Dali...and Rembrandt, Escher, that Elephant, the guy who **** in a can and sold it for several hundred thousand, and you know what? nevermind). So good luck and here's hoping you die to be seen as the true artist you are...
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