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    Quote Originally Posted by hoodedmonk
    Master Carl forgives you!
    Master Carl forgives all who follow the true path of TKD!!

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    AK: Giving new meaning to the word "Unfair."
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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    This thread needs to reach above and beyond. If you expect people to read a prolonged story, at LEAST use paragraph's. Put more thought into the writing, and maybe you can have a respectable hit.

    Re-read the other diary threads for inspiration, if you must.




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    Quote Originally Posted by hoodedmonk
    Master Carl forgives you!
    You will be rewarded with knife thrust defense!

  4. #14

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    This thread needs to reach above and beyond. If you expect people to read a prolonged story, at LEAST use paragraph's. Put more thought into the writing, and maybe you can have a respectable hit.

    Re-read the other diary threads for inspiration, if you must.
    Wow! What's wrong? The only creativity you have is your droll little quips? It's ok, when you get done with the Air Force I'm certain you'll have a great career in the fast food or service industry. :adios:

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    Compared to the other classic diaries, this is uninspired and derivative.

  6. #16

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    Dear diary,
    So, I got a C in English today and my teacher says I should not write about Tae Kwon Do anymore. I think sheís just mad because her husband, who is a communications computer technicain in the Air Force, left her for some guy in the Navy. I think she needs to find her ki. Maybe Tae Kwon Do would help her? Perhaps I should talk to Master Carl and make her an appointment.
    Well, yesterday was my second class. Master Carl showed me my first hyung and we sparred. I drew Cindy. She goes to my high school and was the person that introduced me to Tae Kwon Do after I was beat up for wearing a ninja t-shirt. I canít wait until I can deliver a wicked spinning back kick! Just wait until those closet homos in the wrestling room catch an axe to the face!
    So, after sparring last night Master Randy told me I would be ready to test for my first green stripe. Two more after that and Iíll be ready for my yellow belt then Iím just 22 steps from my black belt! I canít wait! Of course, Iíll have to start saving now because the black belt test in $350 and my mom said she would not pay for my test. I guess itís just an honor Iíll have to earn myself.
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    Compared to the other classic diaries, this is uninspired and derivative.
    Wow, you must have done really well on your SAT's.:jerkit2yf Hurry over and check your email, I'm sure MENSA is filling up your inbox with requests to join.:5butthead

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    Rofl, just let it die.
    While the BJJ one was hilarious, this one's coming across like a cheap copy.

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    Right, because insulting everyone who doesn't like your diary is going to change their opinion and not make you look like a douche.

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    Hell yeah! Hell no!
    Quote Originally Posted by airman kai
    This thread needs to reach above and beyond. If you expect people to read a prolonged story, at LEAST use paragraph's. Put more thought into the writing, and maybe you can have a respectable hit.

    Re-read the other diary threads for inspiration, if you must.
    Agreed.

    If the quality isn't there it basically looks like a cheak mock-up by someone desperately wanting people to say "Har har har, dat waz da funy!" by using someone else's awesome and proven ideas.

    And the random retarded insults at the people who call you on your idiocy... well, let's just say: You're a fucking moron.

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