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9/27/2006 5:02pm
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Looks pretty good.
You might want to consider using unambiguous references to the different players - Teacher or T (or Instructor or Drill Instructor, DI), Student or S, Training Dummy (or Training Partner) or TP.
For example, instead of "You have mount. Grab their right lapel with your left hand and open it. Slide your right hand into the collar, four fingers in" it would read "Student mounts Training Partner. Student grabs TP's right lapel with left hand and opens it. Student slides right hand into TP's collar, four fingers in."
And again, "Common mistakes: A new student will often lay with their arms and legs flat on the floor. Get them to bend their knees and put their hands in good posture (hands by face, elbows to their ribs) to start building these good habits" becomes "Common mistakes: A new student will often lay with their arms and legs flat on the floor. The DI needs to get the Student to bend his/her knees and put the hands in a good posture (hands by face, elbows to their ribs) to start building these good habits."
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9/27/2006 5:45pm
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I really like the idea about mounts. It shows what a difference proper technique and awarness of the situation makes, and instantly cements the importance of escapes in the mind of the student.
I pointed at him [the panhandler], bringing my rear hand up in a subtle approximation of the double Wu Sau guard that is the default hand position in Wing Chun Kung Fu.
"Step away," I hissed.
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Posted On:
9/27/2006 7:39pm--
This is why we always tell people not to take mount like they're getting on a horse...They will often try to just throw they leg over instead of driving their knee through. Since we know this will just get them put into half guard, make sure they get that they need to drive with deliberate pressure across the stomach.
I like the exercise but tend to err on the side of short term practicality in regards to what is taught, simply escaping being mounted and the different positions (with a few variations). -
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9/27/2006 8:03pm
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