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Airman Kai
2/25/2008 1:05pm,

2/25/2008 3:01pm,
The people look like penises.

Frank White
2/25/2008 3:04pm,
I made a cartoon in the 4th grade once. A guy raped a hooker, and the police arrested him for shoplifting. I thought it was funny...

Snake Plissken
2/25/2008 3:06pm,
The people look like penises.
well we know what you and Airman Kai have on the mind.

2/25/2008 3:13pm,
Yeah... talking penises would be wicked pisseh.

Snake Plissken
2/25/2008 3:14pm,
take up snowboarding and maybe you can "learn"?

2/25/2008 5:24pm,
It took me a minute or so to get it... I'm tired.

Uri Shatil
2/25/2008 9:29pm,
I exhaled and my shoulders bounced, you win. But it still feels like you aren't listening...

Make it more animated. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1721410&postcount=9)
Inorporate timing, don't beat dead horses, and take advantage of the fact that you have a comic. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1727128&postcount=17)
Stronger punchlines. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1711936&postcount=10)
Timing and surprise. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1712337&postcount=16)
Surprise, less predictability. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1718113&postcount=18)
Use a more appropriate format. (http://www.bullshido.net/forums/showpost.php?p=1707092&postcount=24)

So far, this one and the super bowl/UFC 81 were the best. I'd like to see these get better, and I'm looking forward to these being funny. Maybe even bookmark worthy. Do you read a lot of webcomics? Right now, it feels like you're ditching any sort of format and doing whatever you feel like (frame-wise). Read some webcomics, pay attention to the format.

I want to see these become funny.

2/25/2008 9:59pm,
Yeah... talking penises would be wicked pisseh.


Superbad is the ****... learn from it Kai

2/25/2008 10:10pm,
I have to say... some of those ^^ cartoons were quality stuff.

2/26/2008 1:11am,
I have to say... some of those ^^ cartoons were quality stuff.
You've lost all intelligence points. Kill yourself now.

3/31/2008 1:59pm,
So is this the end? There hasn't been a new VoiDH since February...don't say it's so!

Snake Plissken
3/31/2008 2:56pm,
Considering the response he got.......

4/01/2008 1:36pm,
But the responses were god damn hilarious! Well, from my side at least.

Jeez, I had Airman Kai pegged for a guy who would chug along despite the many obstacles in his path. Has he lost his Martial Way (whey)?

Roidie McDouchebag
4/01/2008 4:36pm,
Give up, this fucking sucks.

Snake Plissken
4/01/2008 5:03pm,
the comic the commentary or both?